大乐透2019124期开奖直播:蘇州環球教育解析雅思作文之犯罪類話題

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原標題:蘇州環球教育解析雅思作文之犯罪類話題

蘇州環球教育楊曉娟老師為大家帶來2019年3月14日雅思大小作文的點評及范文解析。

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[作文類型]柱狀圖

[作文題目]待補充

[作文圖片]待補充

[綜合點評]柱狀圖的練習考生可以參考C9T2;C5Test 2;C4T2等官方的范文;在回答問題時,考慮總結和比較主要特征,并且在相關的地方進行比較,不能直接機械化的描述圖表的原始信息和數據。注意總結分段,全篇條理清晰。

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[作文題目]Some people think the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Oth-ers, however, think there are better alternative ways to reduce crime. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

[題目分析]討論兩邊觀點并給出個人觀點,文章主題思路可以參考C7Test2。

[題材類別]犯罪類

[思路分析]話題中的絕對詞the best way 說明這個話題的正方觀點在過度強調longer prison. 反方觀點的 better alternative ways 能降低犯罪,意味著考生在論證時邏輯關系應該保證:結果是降低犯罪,無論正方還是反方,都在討論降低犯罪的方案,如果文章中給出的方案沒有以討論犯罪率的降低為結果,那么文章為偏題。

此外,考生需要注意Address all the parts。即,題干中the best way 分成兩個part 一個是way 一個是best;考生在遇到最高級題目進行頭腦風暴時可以問自己這樣的問題:是不是一個方案?是不是最好的方案?

[參考范文]

It has long been a controversial issue how best to maintain the social stability, with one of the priori-ties being reducing crime rates. Although some argue that longer imprisonment may shed crucial lights, I would argue that this is by no means the best way and alternative measures should be ad-dressed.

Those who overemphasize longer prisoning may argue that this may have a deterring effect on the decline in the crime rates. This is because people who know that they may be subject to sentence of longer prisoning behind the bar may reconsider whether to convict the crime, which may have a de-terring effect in the roaring crime rate. Also, longer crime penalty also means felons may spend longer time under control of the authorities, and even they are eligible for parole after serving im-prisonment, they may still behave themselves, rather than being put in jail a second time. However, those who consider the longer terms of sentence may live in denial, because when the crime is con-victed, the motivation and impulse prevail over the sober thoughtfulness of the outcome of convict-ing crime.

Other methods should be implemented to put the high crime rate under control. One of these is raising the self-protection awareness of victims. If people, especially teenager and children, could be told to keep close contact with their relatives, guardian and friends, then they would be well shel-tered with kind reminding of potential dangers, which could greatly reduce the violent crimes. May-be popularizing knowledge about business fraud could also help, as many elderly people are often bailed to invest their pensions in some financial products and become victims of financial fraud. This could be achieved by exercising drill in the local community so that the elder people can be educat-ed and informed on the potential crime scene.

In conclusion, overemphasizing imprisonment may be too narrow an approach and may not achieve the potential effects and combined efforts of kinship and the community may help the teenagers, the minors and the senior citizens out in combating the high crime rate.

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